A more welcome break at Christmas

I finished rewriting chapter twelve this morning and that’s it for me with the second draft of Bad For Good until after Boxing Day. 147 pages completed and I’m happy with how it’s turning out. The last few chapters have been heavily reworked and I’m now just over halfway through this draft. Progress has been good.
I’d welcome any feedback on the opening pages to the book I emailed round earlier this week. I think this book is going to be a considerable improvement on When She Was Bad and if you enjoyed my first effort this one will blow you away!
Happy Christmas
Neil